The title says it all
From: MO <email@example.com>
Date: Thu, 16 Aug 2001 11:06:00 -0700 (PDT)
To: firstname.lastname@example.org, email@example.com
Subject: Funeral Director Shooting Article
I am very disappointed in the headline you chose regarding the attack on Funeral
Director John Harmon III.
Exchange of bullets hospitalizes teen
Hit by return fire, he is in serious condition. A funeral home owner shot in
the shoulder goes to work the next day.
By KATHRYN WEXLER
St. Petersburg Times,
published August 15, 2001
From the main headline you would think it is
TWO thugs fighting it out, rather than a law-abiding citizen protecting his life
and property against a vicious mugger. Heck, you could even think that the
law-abiding citizen tried to mug the teen.
Here is my suggestion for a more honest and
Armed Citizen protects own life -
illegally armed mugger hospitalized
or, try this....
Citizen protects life, property with legal
Armed mugger shot by Armed Citizen -
Citizen returns to work, mugger in hospital
even this is better...
Cowardly teen attacks citizen - teen
hospitalized after citizen protects himself
Please try to do better by your readers by
promoting articles in an open, honest, and truthful manner.
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